Score: 10

"You're All Flashers of Ages!"

submission: Cheer Up! Collab

date: May 18, 2007

Great work and congratulations on to everyone who participated! Rock on, Volit0! Nice FBF lipsyncing, Mr-Womble! A-Wahl's first part with the guy coming out of the car wasn't very good... graphics needed a lot of improvement there. The rest was good!

I have never heard this song before and now I can't get it stuck out of my head for watching this twice! There were some great FBF parts which is always good to watch. You're all flashers of ages!

-ShortMonkey

Score: 1

"Boring"

submission: Frank Dude Ep.1

date: May 18, 2007

Couldn't understand a word they said (thanks for the subtitles) things just magically appeared, graphics were very bad... and not very detailed... voices were just horrible, sounded like they were edited in a program... and not edited very well.

And how people just appeared was annoying... and just very boring.

Try better next time.

-Review Request Club

Score: 2

"Not really good at all"

submission: Sr. Pico

date: May 18, 2007

The music was the best part about this really... most of the animation was laggy, like half of Pico's was getting cut out as he was moving... the gun animation was just horrible, the shape tween with sun could've at least been tweened back to its first position instead of just suddenly going back the first frame of that symbol...

Please don't make your own text with the brush tool, download fonts off a site and type it in... I couldn't read what it said... and the part where it says "Imacow made this" was too quick, I could barely read it.

Try better next time, I can't really say this was a good animation with much effort in it. :(

-Review Request Club

Score: 7

"LOL"

submission: PONG: The Movie (Trailer)

date: May 18, 2007

This looks like it will be a hilarious movie. I can't wait until it comes out (if it ever does). The graphics are pretty good but could be better and use shadows. It got me anticipated which Flash movies rarely do to me.

It definitely looks like it will be a funny movie... the voice acting needed a bit of work or either the sound setting was set too low... To fix that go into File>Publish Settings>Flash>Stream settings and set it to 112kbps. That should make the audio quality for audio that has been set to stream higher but unfortunately increases the file size.

Lipsyncing was very good, but you could add a bit more movement into the character that talks like he moves up his microphone so he looks a bit excited... but the main thing about the graphics that needs improving is shadows... you need to add shadows to your graphics.

Good job, can't wait for the movie to come out!

-Review Request Club

Score: 7

"Well..."

submission: Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 2

date: May 18, 2007

It's very short no doubt about that. The preloader was nice and the background effect during the movie at the beginning... with the green and greyish circles fading into the middle.

The music suited perfectly, and it was funny... what needed lots of improving is the graphics:

The roller skates we're very well done. The body wasn't done very well, definitely needed shadows and better colouring. Eyes could've had more detail... the main part that really helps is the shadowing.

A lazy way to do that is to convert each part of the body into a symbol and apply the drop shadow filter, inner shadow, set the alpha down to 18% or something like that, set each blur axis down to 3 and choose the distance and angle.

Made me laugh but next time make one longer please or a whole animation with heaps of funny shorts... and graphics need improving.

-Review Request Club

Score: 8

"Cool"

submission: The Annoying MangaPsycho

date: May 16, 2007

Good one, the only thing annoying was the voice of that annoying thing. I like how he popped up and was about to do his part for the Have a nice day collab then the annoying character interrupted.

8/10

4/5

-ShortMonkey

Score: 8

"Good but that sound really needs fixing."

submission: Pico goes Goth: Prologue

date: May 3, 2007

Title says it all...

Score: 7

"Graphics are good"

submission: Escape from CampHostility

date: May 1, 2007

But gameplay is impossible... I don't have much of a review because I can't get past the first level, but the graphics are great... but its the gameplay that needs tweaking up A LOT!

Score: 10

"Awesome!"

submission: James The Space Zebra

date: April 30, 2007

Fun to play, loved it!

Score: 10

"Absolutely Perfect"

submission: Pico's Time Tank

date: April 30, 2007

This was a perfect flash animation. The FBF animation was great. I really enjoyed it, graphics were great, kept me entertained. The end was pretty funny too. XD

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