ShortMonkey's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Halloween Reprisal]

{{{ REALLY GOOD }}}

~~~REVIEW~~~
It was a fun game, there was no way to lose tho. Or I'm just too good for it. It had a glitch where you had to be an exact distance away to kill them... But that's because you were under pressure I presume.

~~~POSITIVE POINTS~~~
1. Really fun to play.
2. Different but awesome style of graphics.
3. Violent, which 'tis good.

~~~NEGATIVE POINTS~~~
1. You have to be an exact position to kill them.
2. There was no challenge, you just killed them then moved, nobody tried to kill you.

((( ShortMonkey )))

Rammer responds:

there's no way to lose. and that is not a glitch. if you had read through the previous reviews, you'd know that it was intended like that, but only so the animations sync up nicely.

to the positive points:
1, 2, and 3: thanks, thanks, and thanks :P

negatives:
1. explained above.
2. explained in my responses throughout the reviews.

thanks for your review.

[Cap'n Zappy]

{{{ REALLY GOOD }}}

~~~REVIEW~~~
It was a nice, easy game, easy meaning not many buttons to click. I kept hitting the good guys too lol. Good job.

~~~POSITIVE POINTS~~~
1. Graphics were awesome.
2. Good idea for gameplay, original.

~~~NEGATIVE POINTS~~~
1. It was a bit hard at times, thats all which means you did a great job!

((( ShortMonkey )))

Wonchop responds:

Thanks :D

[Monster munchies]

{{{ REALLY GOOD }}}

~~~REVIEW~~~
It was a bit slow, pretty hard, hard to get the hang of but it was still fun. Awesome graphics. Good job!

~~~POSITIVE POINTS~~~
1. Graphics were awesome!
2. Game was fun to play.

~~~NEGATIVE POINTS~~~
1. A bit slow at times.

((( ShortMonkey )))

fuzz responds:

Thanks for you comments, im glad you liked the graphics and the gameplay. As for it being too slow at times, i guess thats what happens sometimes when you have a random generating code.

[cursor gallerie 1]

{{{ REALLY GOOD }}}

~~~REVIEW~~~
All these cursors were awesome, and very fun to play around with. I loved it. Just so you know, its spelt gallery, not galerie. It makes it look more professional when its spelt right so I just thought you'd like to know. Good work you two!

~~~POSITIVE POINTS~~~
1. All cursors were awesome.
2. Music choice was also good.
3. All were different which made it awesome.

~~~BAD POINTS~~~
1. The preloader looked like it was loaded at 90%, that is all!

yodd responds:

Let me explain why it was "gallerie"
it was a joke about QCstorm being french.

THE PRELOADER GETS STUCK AT 99%, lawl.

Thanks for the review!

[all around tutorial]

{{{ HELPFUL }}}

~~~REVIEW~~~
Ok, I knew everything in there but it would've been helpful to noobs in flash. I'll submit to the tutorials section. It would've also been better if that when the cursor was over a button, the button changes colour. Now here comes the stuff you want to see!

~~~POSITIVE POINTS~~~
1. Had lots of information, good for noobs in Flash.
2. What else can I say, it's tutorial.

~~~NEGATIVE POINTS~~~
1. At the start, the cursor layer was lower than the preloader/play button layer.
2. The cursor stopped working in one part of it.

(((ShortMonkey)))

yodd responds:

you forgot to mention it is graphically challenged, what was I thinking, just a gradient? lol.

Thanks for the review!

[Animated Preloaders]

Sorry but

I reckon it's not that good. I couldn't follow it. Maybe make another one but make it longer, step by step, and easy to follow. Just writing and honest review.

PARAGON-pvp responds:

Thanks for your honest review, if anyone has questions I'm more than happy to help!

PARAGON-pvp

[RPG Tutorial The Basics]

Real Good!

I see you've made 2 tutorials of RPG so why don't you make an RPG game?

Just suggesting, it might be really good.

Staticblaze responds:

Because RPG games don't make it into the portal. People only realize that once they make it.

[Shaolin Dodgeball]

Nice Game!

Keep it up! Next time put a preloader on tho. Nice job!

ReklessCreati0n responds:

There is a preloader, it just isn't that big of a game, so it loads fast.