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March of Madness

2006-11-05 16:50:14

{{{ PRETTY GOOD }}}

~$~REVIEW~$~
It was pretty weird, graphics were pretty good except for the stick figures. Also very short. Okay job.

~$~POSITIVE POINTS~$~
1. Graphics except for sticks were good.
2. Good choice for music.

~$~NEGATIVE POINTS~$~
1. A bit too short.

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sticktale responds:

Thanks!

Yeah.. It was originally planned to got for over 1 minute.. but I really didn't want to fix that incredibly poor, now deleted scene, and I had no inspiration to work more on that guy on the stage.. so I pieced it together a little, I spose, and just, ended it.

Glad you like my graphics improvement. :)

Halloween Runaway

2006-10-31 16:23:20

{{{ OKAY }}}

~~~REVIEW~~~
Graphics were terrible, you couldv'e put more effort into that. The background was an imported picture... and it was just motion tweening... Not very good.

~~~POSITIVE POINTS~~~
1. The music was ok.

~~~NEGATIVE POINTS~~~
1. Graphics were horrible.
2. Boring.
3. All motion tweens.

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Piemix responds:

lol i can't draw. haha thanks for your review!

PlumberMan 2

2006-10-24 23:52:57

{{{ NICE }}}

~~~REVIEW~~~
The graphics were pretty good, you like gradients don't you? Just the voices weren't loud enough.

~~~POSITIVE POINTS~~~
1. Graphics were pretty good.
2. A bit of humour.
3. Nice violence fight scenes, not too violent but still nice.

~~~NEGATIVE POINTS~~~
1. Voices weren't loud enough.

Jonimator responds:

Yeah, i guess i do like gradients.
Don't why the sound went so quite/muffled it isnt ussualy. Anyway glad you liked it!

[ACD] Mozilla!!!

2006-10-24 18:05:00

{{{ PRETTY GOOD }}}

~~~REVIEW~~~
It was funny, I use mozilla all the time. You maybe should've traced bitmap the images, but still tell us that you did. And also it wouldv'e been awesome if you made mozilla shoot Internet explorer.

~~~POSITIVE POINTS~~~
1. Humour, loved it, and I'm a Firefox user.

~~~NEGATIVE POINTS~~~
1. A bit slow, and sound wasn't that great.

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*Review Request Club*

FattyWhale responds:

Hmm...I like the IE idea, perhaps I will use it sometime in an upcoming movie.

Embryonic Adventures

2006-10-24 07:24:03

{{{ REALLY GOOD }}}

~~~REVIEW~~~
Ok, it was a bit slow, but I understand it was slow so you could sync it with the music. It was a bit slow that it was a bit boring at times, great graphics, and music was good! A lot of effort too.

~~~GOOD POINTS~~~
1. Graphics were awesome!
2. Story line was simple, and nice.
3. Original, very original.

~~~BAD POINTS~~~
1. It was a bit too slow at times, which made it a bit boring.
2. The ending wasn't that good, I was expecting them to fight, but you may not be good at animating that so you kept it simple, which is the way a Flash animator should do it.

~~~QUESTIONS~~~
1. How high was the frame rate?
2. It looked full of effort, how long did it take you?

Borogrove responds:

You're right, animating isn't my strong point. But like I said, maybe in the future after I've improved I'll go back to it, because there is more that can be done with it.

In answer to your questions;
1. 24 FPS
2. Approximately 3 months of not-so-intensive work, from idea to finished product.

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